[week 1] comments from P2

This is the report about my graduation process. I will try to update it every week. With writing down the progress regularly it is a good tool to evaluate the process. Besides it is more clear at the end (week 18).

At 13 January was a go/no go presentation of the initial design and learning plan.

Comments were:
- why is steel used for the connections (and not glue for example)
- drawings are not complete with information, they have little depth
- starting points and red line not totally clear
- did you look at all variants possible
- why should an architect pick this product
- presentation could have more relation between images and speech